What a thorough and gorgeous shrine! I like the idea of having navigation in two places (the bar across the top, plus the dropdown-like lists underneath the intro paragraph).
The information is broken up into well-thought-out sections and provides enough introduction to the series even for people like me who have never read the manga. And your love for Sohma Kyo shines through every single page. <3 A triumphant revamp, indeed!
Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
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Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
Thank you so much!! ^_^ I'm glad I made my love for the character show through!Robin wrote:What a thorough and gorgeous shrine! I like the idea of having navigation in two places (the bar across the top, plus the dropdown-like lists underneath the intro paragraph).
The information is broken up into well-thought-out sections and provides enough introduction to the series even for people like me who have never read the manga. And your love for Sohma Kyo shines through every single page. <3 A triumphant revamp, indeed!
I like to have the navigation on the intro pages for my sites now so that people can see what exactly is currently on the site overall. Kinda like a site map! :D It's a nice little snap shot of the site's content, and people have a better idea of what's in the top navigation bar without having to mouse-over everything first. :3
I'm glad there was enough information there for you to understand what's happening too! That's been a major goal of mine for these redesigns; I want to make sure that anyone new to the series can understand what I'm rambling on about. Thanks for verifying that it's working. ^_^
- Laura
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
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Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
I was totally not half-asleep when I added your shrine to the directory, but idk how else you'd explain me visiting a shrine, seeing a big gap where the layout image is supposed to be, AND NOT COMMENT ON IT LOL. Sorry!!
Wow, yay for finishing the revamp! I visited your Kyo shrine several times over the past months (even before you had resumed activity around Amassment), so I know what a huge change this is. So much praise to you for pulling it off, and for having the courage to go over such an old shrine in the first place... o___o (It's fascinating that this shrine existed before Fruits Basket was completely released.) It really speaks of your love for the character. <3
I really like how you introduced most of the cast with focus on their relation to Kyo. I haven't seen that done before, and I think that's a great way to go about it, especially if you're shrining a long series with many characters, and even more so if those characters are complex! It also emphasizes your shrine's subject from the get-go. ... /takes notes <O><O>
I enjoyed reading what you wrote under "The True Curse", and your explanation for the Cat's true form - especially the link you made between the smell, the locking up and the rejection of eternity.
Your "opinion" sections on the respective pages are lovely, and nicely complement your summaries! (Alsoooo the one on the Yuki page: "While I think Yuki can be unnecessarily mean towards Kyo by going out of his way to insult him, it's understandable considering how much Kyo emphasises his unjustified hatred for him." I love that you pointed this out so much!)
I like that you included a timeline - that's an original way to sum up a character or to make the order of events clearer to visitors who aren't familiar with the material, but enjoy reading your shrine anyway.
HAHAHA THE RETRONESS SURVIVED IN YOUR MEDIA SECTION I LOVE IT XD
Anyway, there are some things I I thought I should point out:
Wow, yay for finishing the revamp! I visited your Kyo shrine several times over the past months (even before you had resumed activity around Amassment), so I know what a huge change this is. So much praise to you for pulling it off, and for having the courage to go over such an old shrine in the first place... o___o (It's fascinating that this shrine existed before Fruits Basket was completely released.) It really speaks of your love for the character. <3
I really like how you introduced most of the cast with focus on their relation to Kyo. I haven't seen that done before, and I think that's a great way to go about it, especially if you're shrining a long series with many characters, and even more so if those characters are complex! It also emphasizes your shrine's subject from the get-go. ... /takes notes <O><O>
I enjoyed reading what you wrote under "The True Curse", and your explanation for the Cat's true form - especially the link you made between the smell, the locking up and the rejection of eternity.
Your "opinion" sections on the respective pages are lovely, and nicely complement your summaries! (Alsoooo the one on the Yuki page: "While I think Yuki can be unnecessarily mean towards Kyo by going out of his way to insult him, it's understandable considering how much Kyo emphasises his unjustified hatred for him." I love that you pointed this out so much!)
I like that you included a timeline - that's an original way to sum up a character or to make the order of events clearer to visitors who aren't familiar with the material, but enjoy reading your shrine anyway.
HAHAHA THE RETRONESS SURVIVED IN YOUR MEDIA SECTION I LOVE IT XD
Anyway, there are some things I I thought I should point out:
- There's a random � on "First Meeting" and "New Year".
- Your latest update on the update page says you're still stuck in March 2004. 8D
- There's another point that I think was misinterpreted in a translation, so I'll PM you about that!
Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
Awwwww, Lethe, thank you!! ^-^ Your comments mean a lot to me, especially since you're familiar with what the site used to be. It was a LOT of work to go through it all and try to get all the facts about literally everything over 136 chapters straight. So I'm really, really glad that you enjoyed going through the whole site. I'm also glad I managed to present it all in a unique fashion. :D
I'm planning on going back to the timeline section and adding chapter references for anyone who wants to read more themselves. I kind of regret not including references throughout the site but at least in that section, people can have a better idea of what happens and when it happens. Like a snapshot. :3
Thanks for pointing out some of the mistakes too! I've noticed those weird symbols but I haven't had the chance to go back and fix those pages yet. I also have a bit of text formatting to do and some editing; it's helped to get the site out in the open and take a step back from it for a week or so. I can come back with a fresh mind. xD
And yes, I'd definitely affiliate!! :D In a heartbeat. <3
I'm planning on going back to the timeline section and adding chapter references for anyone who wants to read more themselves. I kind of regret not including references throughout the site but at least in that section, people can have a better idea of what happens and when it happens. Like a snapshot. :3
Thanks for pointing out some of the mistakes too! I've noticed those weird symbols but I haven't had the chance to go back and fix those pages yet. I also have a bit of text formatting to do and some editing; it's helped to get the site out in the open and take a step back from it for a week or so. I can come back with a fresh mind. xD
And yes, I'd definitely affiliate!! :D In a heartbeat. <3
- Laura
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
A very sensible thing to do LOL.wolfrun wrote:it's helped to get the site out in the open and take a step back from it for a week or so. I can come back with a fresh mind. xD
Oh wow, yes, chapter references in the timeline would be SO SO SO great. I wrote about Kyo and Kyoko on my shrine, and how
SPOILERSPOILER_SHOW
Kyo's memories of her as well as Kyoko's presentation as a character in general are written about in a fragmentary way, and how memories of her (especially Kyo's memories of her) are ALL over the place. SO many chapters of him across the volumes remembering her, second only to Tohru.
And the Kyoko bits aren't in chronological order (which fascinates me, so I wrote about that too: puzzle pieces that you need to collect yourself),
SPOILERSPOILER_SHOW
with Kyo's crucial memories coming at the very end of the series.
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Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
Wow! That is gorgeous. And the introduction section is so helpful for someone like me who isn't part of the fandom. Very detailed. Well done!
Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
@Lethe - Thanks, I'm glad you think so!! It might take a while for me to get around to it but I'm going to put it on my to do list for sure now. x3
Thank you, I'm glad the introduction section was helpful to you! :)FandomSavant wrote:Wow! That is gorgeous. And the introduction section is so helpful for someone like me who isn't part of the fandom. Very detailed. Well done!
- Laura
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
I've always been a fan of your Kyo shrine so I'm pretty excited to see this completed. I haven't had a chance to read through it yet but I will soon! It looks amazing! <3
Re: Baroque Orange (Sohma Kyo - Fruits Basket)
Thanks Crystal!! :) <3 I hope you'll enjoy it whenever you get around to reading it!
- Laura
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org