Senpai Noticed Me!

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nyxmidnight
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Senpai Noticed Me!

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I am gonna test it more and add error pages tomorrow, but for now, I consider it done and good to go.

Senpai Noticed Me!, a Junpei/Akihiko shrine and fanlisting

This is my first shrine about a couple (my Persona 3 OTP), so any insight or critique would be welcome!
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Nice job on the shrine, well written and even if I don't know the characters I found it a nice read. Good job and gratz at finishing it!
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First of all: the layout is fantastic, as is the title (so cute!) :D

I think you did a great job of explaining each of the characters and why they belong together, too. I'm not familiar with Persona 3, but this shrine is still very understandable ^_^

Also, I liked the Links and Extras section, especially because you've included your fanworks and a handy tiny glossary. I kindasorta had known what senpai meant before now, but this was a straightforward definition--many thanks! :D
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Thank you both! I'm glad it was easy to understand and hopefully not too rambly :heart: Given that Junpei/Akihiko is a large part of my fanworks, I couldn't not toot my own horn for a bit there.
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Post by Todd »

I'm not going to read much because I still plan to play this game when I get around to it, but congrats on finishing! I know you've been working hard on this. I love your simple layouts! They look great on my phone, too, haha.

Have you thought about making a Persona 3 introduction page for people unfamiliar with the game, or is your plan to gear the site toward people who have played Persona 3? Either is fine; I was just curious who you plan for your audience to be.
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Hurray for pretty responsive layouts! :D

I have a mini-intro on the front page, actually! Do you think I should write more? I must admit I have never thought about my audience before...
Join in the Tale, in the Blight, of Conquest and Lies
Come the Sun, to Tarnish in the Sky
Vow that we shall Tear the Light - Dark seizes the Throne
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