I feel no pressure to change anything! I know the Black Fang section is lacking and I want to update it. I appreciate your impressions and you feeling comfortable enough to tell me your thoughts! I cannot improve (as a writer or a shriner) if I don't allow myself to take feedback. I agree that I need more information for the site (specifically the Black Fang section, I am honestly quite content with most of the other sections); I'm just also struggling with where to add it (and when). I look for excuses to write - trust me, there's no problem there. The reason I asked follow up questions was to see what you thought might be missing (like if I missed obvious details or ideas that you thought would make the site clearer and more enjoyable).Destinie wrote:Ah, that's ok, I understand. ^^ I'm just one of those people that see pictures and go "ooh shiny!" but I understand the idea of being text-centric. I think adding more about Black Fang would be helpful. Those were just some impressions I had when I visited so I hope you don't feel pressured to change anything! ;o;
That being said, I enjoy feedback and constructive criticism. And if I didn't want feedback, I wouldn't have posted! So thank you, Destinie-dear. I appreciate it! I will add more information to the Black Fang because they play a large role as antagonists to the game. My main focus was merely following a Linus-centric outline.