Primevère

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Primevère

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Introducing... my first shine in forever...
Primevère!

Dedicated to Cherche of Fire Emblem Awakening! I love her so much :blush:, she's so weird and elegant and badass. This was a fun little shrine to make. I might expand a bit in the future, but for now it includes all the fun stuff I wanted to write about.

Let me know if there are any glaring errors! Every time I look at a page I find some sort of mistake, haha. :heart:
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Cherche! <333 I love it Michelle! Seeing more Fire Emblem shrines popping up makes me super happy.

The only problem I really have with it is the navigation. Sometimes I end up clicking something else instead of the page I want. The rest of it is absolutely gorgeous though! <3
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The layout is beautiful! I love it! I am not familiar with the character, but I do enjoy looking at all of the images you have on the information pages and reading through! :)
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Thanks Crystal and Megan!
Crystal wrote:The only problem I really have with it is the navigation. Sometimes I end up clicking something else instead of the page I want. The rest of it is absolutely gorgeous though! <3
Yeah noticed that too! I spaced it out a little more so the links should be easier to click now.
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Looks awesome, Michelle! I happened to be on your domain yesterday and got excited to see a new site on there. :P I only browsed through it because I haven't played Awakening yet, but I will certainly read it in more detail whenever I get around to playing!
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Michelle wrote:Yeah noticed that too! I spaced it out a little more so the links should be easier to click now.
It is much better now. :D It is a tricky font because you can't click on the word but instead a little higher on it. Still, it is a gorgeous font. <3
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Wow FE has certainly gotten famous in shrine making. XD I'm still not into the battle system, but I enjoy looking through the fansites and leaning about the characters. Beautiful design and detailed information, it's all really well done. :D
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I love this, Michelle! I'm super excited to see FE: Awakening shrines popping up, too. I'm actually in the middle of one myself.

Anyway, everything reads great. I love your written style. I enjoyed the strategy section, and the page on Minerva. I also love the layout. I'm still having issues with the navigation (the same thing Crystal mentioned) where I have to aim a little higher than the word to go to the right page. Other than that, everything is great.
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Thanks all!

And yeah the navigation is a pain... I really wanna use that font but idk if it will cooperate. But I'll play around with it.
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You might have to resort to using Javascript rollovers if the font's weird height won't behave--I had to do that on one of my layouts. That font too was a beautiful but finicky work of art, lol
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