Me again! I am going through a REVAMP ALL THE SHRINES phase (unfortunately?), so I here I am bringing what I believe to be my first "official" shrine to your attention for suggestions.
So Scandalous!, a shrine to the demon Mara from the Shin Megami Tensei series. Spoilers: it's a dick joke.
I don't have any particular beef with this website. I just want to know, since I'm going to overhaul the layout, if there is content you think I should add to this one-pager.
Thank you in advance!
So Scandalous! (Mara)
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So Scandalous! (Mara)
Join in the Tale, in the Blight, of Conquest and Lies
Come the Sun, to Tarnish in the Sky
Vow that we shall Tear the Light - Dark seizes the Throne
Lost in thoughts, all alone
Come the Sun, to Tarnish in the Sky
Vow that we shall Tear the Light - Dark seizes the Throne
Lost in thoughts, all alone
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Re: So Scandalous! (Mara)
Just a couple suggestions, really :)
- Some links to further information about each game you mention in the Notable Appearances section? You could use each link as a way to highlight your other Megaten sites' content. (Persona 4 section could use a little beefing up as well.)
- Maybe put the Hello Amassment! thingy at the top of the page, rather than close to the bottom?
(Also, given Mara's rather phallic form, this line had me BWAHAHAHAing: "The ritual will succeed, thrusting the protagonist into a boss fight with the newborn Seraph." I'm sorry, I am eternally 12.)
- Some links to further information about each game you mention in the Notable Appearances section? You could use each link as a way to highlight your other Megaten sites' content. (Persona 4 section could use a little beefing up as well.)
- Maybe put the Hello Amassment! thingy at the top of the page, rather than close to the bottom?
(Also, given Mara's rather phallic form, this line had me BWAHAHAHAing: "The ritual will succeed, thrusting the protagonist into a boss fight with the newborn Seraph." I'm sorry, I am eternally 12.)
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Re: So Scandalous! (Mara)
Thank you Robin!
Mara is a master of penis puns, that's what makes a shrine for him so fun to write XD Maybe I should add Mara quotes?
Mara is a master of penis puns, that's what makes a shrine for him so fun to write XD Maybe I should add Mara quotes?
Join in the Tale, in the Blight, of Conquest and Lies
Come the Sun, to Tarnish in the Sky
Vow that we shall Tear the Light - Dark seizes the Throne
Lost in thoughts, all alone
Come the Sun, to Tarnish in the Sky
Vow that we shall Tear the Light - Dark seizes the Throne
Lost in thoughts, all alone
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Re: So Scandalous! (Mara)
LOL! Yes, bring on the snort-inducing quotes!! :D