Revolutionary Girl

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Tara
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Sun Apr 23, 2017 3:02 pm

REVOLUTIONARY GIRL
for Ann from Persona 5
If you follow me on Twitter, you've probably seen me rambling about this, but-- I've been working on Revolutionary Girl for a few days now. I only have one page written so far as I'm replaying the game and writing content as I play and I... haven't gotten very far yet, haha. I just wanted to start writing as soon as possible. I haven't been this excited to write in a while (since Ranka, at least), so I'm really stoked to get started on this.

The layout took me Some Time, and a lot of the design choices were born from mistakes that I actually really liked as opposed to what I was going for.

Right now I want to focus on getting the Panther section finished (I started looking up Ultimate Weapons/Gear and got sidetracked by Akira cosplay..............), but I'll have to start playing again to finish her confidant section since that's going to be lengthy. I'll be posting small bits at a time I think!

I also need to update Burn My Dread with new Persona 5 information...!
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Tue Apr 25, 2017 6:19 pm

I love what I see so far! I really like that acidic red with the duller green, and the way that the image goes beyond the bounds of the table (just the way revolutionary girls do). Can't wait to see more, I'm getting real curious about this Persona 5. Total newb to the series.

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Thu Apr 27, 2017 10:00 pm

I'm looking foward to this!! I actually think it's pretty cool that the layout's main image is on the bottom. The warm colors are very easy on the eyes, and the overall style makes it uniquely elegant in that it's got a fun quality to it. Job well done! :star:

Also 20 pts. for the Annalyzed pun, hahaha!!

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Mon May 01, 2017 2:38 pm

I love what you have so far and the color scheme! A new addition to your Persona collection! *_* <3
I also appreciate the larger text size.

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Sat May 06, 2017 12:51 pm

Great look (love the image!!) and it looks like the content is shaping up well so far! PUNS YES <3
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Sat May 06, 2017 7:46 pm

Love the layout. I haven't had a chance to play Persona 5 yet but I'm looking forward to it. I'm looking forward to reading the shrine once I get a bit further in the game... and by further I mean started.
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Sun May 07, 2017 12:56 pm

Thank you everyone! Since I posted I've posted a few new pages, namely the weapons page, and a couple pages in the essays section regarding Kamoshida. (here and here) Warning for heavy plot spoilers, of course~!

Right now I'm trying to fill out her Confidant page, which is taking some time as I need to actually play the game to flesh that out. It is coming along well though! I'm focusing on Ann's confidant to get through it as quickly as possible. I'm only getting through the second Palace so I have some time before it's complete.

Edit: Got the Personality and Carmen pages up! Next I'm planning on starting the relationship pages, as well as the Lovers.

Overall I think I'm making good progress! Most of my writing is just in research right now as I'm playing the game, but new pages should be coming out more frequently soon.
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Mon May 08, 2017 10:57 am

I NEED TO PLAY FASTER SO I CAN READ THIS

I am so happy the first P5 shrine is for Ann I LOVE ANN SO MUCH

*keyboard smash*
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Mon May 08, 2017 3:10 pm

I'm not reading this yet (probably not for a long time... the entire Persona series is on my to-play list, but it might actually need a few years to get this far), but congratulations on getting this out, and wow, that's a cool and really unique layout!

By the way, I really like what you did with the main hub site with all the series information. It makes so much sense. I'll leave the tab open and I'll give it a more in-depth read later...

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Drea
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Sat Sep 23, 2017 5:07 pm

Necromancy being performed, but I love Ann (I uh.. rp her on tumblr sometimes) and the Persona series in general, so it's great to see some shrines around about them! (this looks really neat btw and the name is perf. <3)

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