Amassment Message Board

This is a general sticky for anyone who's looking for others to proofread their content, be it a single page or section they're uncertain about or a site to be released. This only concerns calls for private beta readers, where a separate topic in the Shrine Betas forum might otherwise seem unwarranted.

If you're posting the page or site in question in public along with the request, please make a separate topic in this forum to keep things neat and organized. If you're offering your proofreading services in general, please make a topic in the Amassment Exchange forum.

This topic is only for requests and people volunteering in response.

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Hi team - I think I will be done with content for my Quistis shrine this weekend. I wondered if I might get a second opinion on my work? I'm overall looking for an impression of how much of my analysis is too memoir or self-indulgent - whether or not Quistis in fact comes strongly out what I've written about her. Though I made my transistor shrine, this is my first 'real' shrine in the sense of being multi-page and also with a lot more in-world detail. I know there's no right answer, but I'd like feedback that would help me determine if I've somehow done it wrong anyway, or what needs improvement.

I have pieces I can share now, and a few more fundamental pieces (plot / character) that will be done by Sunday. I'm on discord or please pm for my email if interested! some of these are on the current page (http://raygunsue.org/quistis), but I'm redoing the layout, so I haven't uploaded most of the content I've worked on in the past few months.

Also, I would happily 'swap' if someone wanted to look over each other's work! I'm a newb, but I love to read. :)

happy to give it a look over whenever, just toss it my way.